Leopardpaw of ThunderClan

[leopardpaw]

Name:: leopardpaw

Gender:: tom

Age:: 8 moons

Clan/ Group:: thunderclan

Postion:: Apprentice

Description:: Ginger tom. brown sploches scatered along sides

Personality:: friendy cat with a good sence of humor. wants to grow up to be a great warrior. very sneaky.

History:: unknown mother. he would always be getting into trouble. hopping around the camp, annoying warriors as a kit. On the day he got his apprentice name he was so excited he hit his nose against his mentor’s.

RolePlay Sample:: As leopardpaw came out of the apprentice’s den, he saw that the ground was pure white. He had heard about this stuff before but he didn’t know what it was. “SNOW!” he shouted, jumping around the clearing, waking everyone up. “sorry,” he said, embarrassed. His mentor came up to him an cuffed him. “Go catch some fresh kill, leopardpaw,” said his mentor. What am I doing! He thought to him self…

[Niftey]

This is really messy but here you go!



I can't approve this until you make all the mistakes correct! But this is a nice first draft!

[leopardpaw]

Name:: LeopardPaw

Gender:: Tom

Age:: 8 Moons

Clan/ Group:: ThunderClan

Postion:: Apprentice

Description:: Ginger tom, with brown splotches scattered along his sides. Green eyes.

Personality:: Friendly cat with a good sense of humor. He wants to grow up to be a great warrior. Very sneaky. Sometimes the senior warriors of the clan get mad at him. He’s very jumpy, too. Hard to get him to obey orders.

History::. he would always be getting into trouble. hopping around the camp, annoying warriors as a kit. On the day he got his apprentice name he was so excited he hit his nose against his mentor’s.

RolePlay Sample:: As LeopardPaw came out of the apprentice’s den, he saw that the ground was pure white. He had heard about this stuff before but he didn’t know what it was. “SNOW!” he shouted, jumping around the clearing, waking everyone up. “Sorry,” he said, embarrassed. His mentor came up to him and cuffed him. “Go catch some fresh-kill, LeopardPaw,” said his mentor. What am I doing! He thought to himself.

i couldn't get those two paragraphs that you wanted, and i couldnt come up with a mothers name

(microsoft word failed me again)

[Niftey]

Ok, I'm going to approve you, but be prepared to learn a lot about role-playing here!

PS someone will get in touch with you about getting a mentor