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Post by ::Key::Lime/\RainyC:: on Apr 2, 2010 17:05:59 GMT -5
Name:: Goldenpaw
Gender:: She-cat
Age:: 7 moons
Clan/ Group:: CloudClan
Postion:: Apprentice
Description::
Goldenpaw is a small ginger tabby she-cat with white paws and chest. She also have burning amber eyes.
Personality:: Who said curiosity killed the cat? Goldenpaw isn't not dead yet is she? Yes she's very curious, some cats say Goldenpaw is also too nosy but she just thinks that whatever is said should be known by everyone! She is always ready to learn something new. Goldenpaw loves going out to hunt or battle practice 'cuz she can learn new things. Goldenpaw is very upbeat and positive and hates it when cats are sad.
History::As a kit Goldenpaw was always sneaking off and messing things up. It's not that she was getting into trouble, it's just that trouble jumped out at her every chance it got! She hadn't any siblings to play with so Goldenpaw was always tried to play with her father. He didn't like that very much so she was just stuck playing by herself. It really wasn't fun. Now She's been an apprentice for about a moon and Goldenpaw has made a bunch of apprentice friends. She thinks.....
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Post by moonshade on Apr 3, 2010 2:30:38 GMT -5
i enjoy that you used a different perspective, but the third person rules, i believe, extends to biographies, so i am asking you to convert your bio ro 3rd person sorry <=)
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Post by ::Key::Lime/\RainyC:: on Apr 3, 2010 11:28:00 GMT -5
k -dies- I just changed all the I's to third person stuff and fixed the grammar so it worked
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Post by moonshade on Apr 3, 2010 13:10:53 GMT -5
alright accepted
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