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Post by tonicrage on May 2, 2010 14:05:50 GMT -5
Name::Tonerclaw
Gender:: Tom
Age:: 14 Moons
Clan/ Group:: LeafClan
Postion:: Warrior
Description:: Tonerclaw is a Light Grey Tom with Black stripes and Gold eyes. He has a scar over his eye when he was fighting off a DarkClan Warrior at 12 moons old. He also has a scar on his left front leg from the same time as the scar over his eye. He also has white spots all over his pelt. And He is really strong.
Personality:: He can get angry sometimes but he gets over it in 1-2 minutes. He is really patient and he gets angry at a few things. He is really curious too. And he is a quick thinker.
Family:: Some elders named RedClaw and Shakeheart are his parents. And a son named Tamerpaw.
History:: He has had 4 apprentices. And he also 1`kit. The kit is named Tamerpaw now and Tamerpaw is 7 moons old. And he has 9 warrior freinds. Also he has medcat freinds And 3 cats that were his freinds were Leaders. For Deputies,he has had 3 freinds that were deputies. He has made alot more freinds though. And as an apprentice he has had 6 apprentice freinds.
RolePlay Sample:: In the night,he stalks his prey. His prey has found its way home,and its going there. But he pounces in time to catch it and bring it home,and all cats wake up and ask "Where have you been Tonerclaw?" He says "Out hunting. Look at this plump vole."
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Post by sandriel on May 2, 2010 17:34:40 GMT -5
For the history, it's not possible for a cat to have had four apprentices at the age of 14 moons. He would have become a warrior two moons ago, and training one apprentice takes about 5-6 moons.
If you don't mind me requesting, it would also help if you put your lines in complete sentences; those that are not cut into a new line every few words. I also think that roleplay is supposed to be past tense, but I'm not sure if that's mandatory or not.
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